Brevity, as they say, is the sister of talent. Everyone wants to show off his talent, but his sister is a difficult thing. For some reason, ingenious thoughts themselves clothe themselves in complex sentences with a multitude of participles. However, it is in your power to simplify your proposals and make them understandable and accessible to everyone.
Instruction manual
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To make life easier for the addressee (whether the listener or the reader), try replacing the participle and participial sentences with short subordinate clauses, especially if there are too many above-mentioned turns in one sentence. "A cat who came home, just eaten a mouse, purring loudly, fondled to the owner, trying to look into his eyes, hoping to get the fish brought from the store" - this will not work. Break this design into several parts, take your time and do not try to say everything in one sentence, and you will be happy.
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If you conceived a brilliant utterance, but it contained too many subordinate sentences (especially with one union), then it is better to divide the utterance into several separate sentences or omit some element. "We decided that he would tell Marina Vasilyevna that Katya would tell Vita that …" - you can go on endlessly. Stop in time and remember the person who will read or listen to it.
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However, the pitfalls lie not only in the structure of the proposal. Pay attention to vocabulary. Foreign words, long terms, words gleaned from fiction of the 19th century - all this will only complicate the perception. It is necessary to clarify for yourself for which audience you are composing the text: techies, of course, will understand both complex terms and specific words; but if you offer the same words to a teacher of literature, she is unlikely to understand you.
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Talent is a great thing. If you are talented (and people without abilities do not exist), many roads open before you. But talent is not in complexity, but in simplicity, oddly enough. Be simpler and your talents will be understandable and accessible to everyone.
